(continued) And i came to find out that this shawty was a spender Oh and did i mention shawty was the bartender? So i stayed at the club and it was half past three We were like the only two left, just her and then me So now shifts over and we headin to my apartment So we kan get ready kuz the night just started ;] this rap sucked lol i just did it for fun

I said "shawty watchu doin" She sayd nothin just chillin I said i dont know you but its you im really fillin She said oh is that so And i said yes dam right So why dont you come play for the night? She sayd nawh shawty i gotta work for the papuh I said well then alright but can we go chill later? She said yeah sure but for now i gotta work So then we started talkin chillin and conversatin Found out her man left her bekuz the nigga was just hatin

lol dude point blank period u suck i recomend workn at a local food store?

you basically copied the from Roses by outkast

so i met her out back we was chiillin at the party and shes a good girl but i make her act naughty however all her freinds was actin real snotty so i plaed em to the left singin to myself loddy dody(slick rick) got dat girl number and all her freinds too she said you er man but we got a eye on you

yep....big girls need love too..but they gotta pay

Raps good... but you aint. Banging on about guns serious? Your lyrics are fake. Most rappers rap about experience, where you just wannabe the most common copycat. Plus you cant even reply without making yourself look even more than a dickhead than what you already did. Give up you sad fuck.

hater...u must be a fucking slow fucker to say that rap is wack..u definately dont know shit about metaphors and similes...ur as slow as a snail men...all i can feel for u rite now is pity...sad mothafucka...thunder fire u

fucking terrible. give up. seriously. most people leave lyrics and thats fine, but yours are shit and false. wasteman.

LAWL

errwhere i go ma hand is grabbin a gun/ i dont give a fuck like i'm a catholic nun/ i keep shit in motion,far frm a stagnant person/n me being broke in d hood is like seein a pregnant virgin/ apart frm Mary/ ma white T stay pure,fresh n clean like d heart of Mary/ n im ready 2 buy anythin,no matter d cost/ 4 ull niggas d price is allat,2 me its a just/ cus ma hand stay on d 9/ while i stay on d grind/ n ull niggas run ur mouth til ur words cross d line/i can c u've grown wings/

ooo i get it now

fat girl beat means someone rapping about their fat girl. i love my fat girl. fat girl? she nicest girl in the whole wide world. fat girl. this beat goes perfect for lyrics regarding fat girls. this is a fat girl beat.

how does it sound like a fat girl beat

big girls need love 2.....i laughed when i first read that

shitty ass beat...i just wanna say this to see how many thumbs down i get.

THIS SOUNDS LIKE A FAT GIRL BEAT

this sound like a fat girl beat

someone lick my puss L

i make love to my girl wit this shit brah.. its hott.

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Teddy Pain

i agree haha, hilarious

fucking brilliant

hahahaha